Evaluation 1b

Evaluation Question 4 - How did you use media technologies in the construction, research and planning and evaluation stages?

Evalutaion Question 3 - What have you learned from your audience feedback?

Below is a short video of our target audience watching the trailer and giving our group feedback. 

Here is a voice recording of feedback from our fellow media class members. We decided to show everyone the clips that we had previously filmed (not edited fully) to gain some reference of what was good and what we needed to improve on. We recorded this feedback and this is was their responses. 

Evaluation Question 2 - How effective is the combination of your main product and ancillary texts?

 Above you will see our Video of use talking about how effective our combination of our main product and ancillary texts were, bellow you can see a powerpoint that goes along with this, please view this powerpoint to see the question in more detail

Evaluation Question 1 - In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?

Please see below for the powerpoint used in this video:

Evaluation Question 1 from bwallwork

Audience Feedback

Below you will see just a few of the audience feedback that we received, we took everything in to consideration in order to strengthen our final trailer.

Here is a voice recording of feedback from our fellow media class members. We decided to show everyone the clips that we had previously filmed (not edited fully) to gain some reference of what was good and what we needed to improve on. We recorded this feedback and this is was their responses. 

This is a short video of our target audience watching the trailer and giving our group feedback. 

Completed Bloodline Trailer

Creating Bloodline Animated Logo and Coming Soon from ending of BloodLine Trailer

 Here is the screenshots of me creating the Bloodline Animated Logo and Coming Soon that was used at the end of our trailer.

I added the Bloodline logo into After Effects and added pre-keyed effects like Rain and Smoke

Next I added shattering glass at the end to make it look like the screen got shot by a gun

I also added an altered version of the bloodline logo to make it look like it took damage from the gun shots.

Here is the start of when i started to create the animation 'In Cinemas June 10, www.bloodline.com' in after effects after creating it in Photoshop

I added the .png file i created in photoshop into the composition.

And then added pre-keyed rain effects

Next I altered the Transform effects of the .png file and changed the scale so it looks as if the text is coming towards you.

Here is the .png file created in Photoshop and used at the end of our trailer

'WolfPack' Production Logo for Bloodline Trailer

(If above link is broken please use the one below)

Here is the final Animated Production Logo for our Trailer 'Bloodline', however we plan to use this production logo at the beginning of our trailer and therefore we will most likely cut the animation so that it starts around 0:06 rather from the start.

GarageBand - Voice Overs

We used GarageBand to do final voice overs for clips that had a horrible background noise that wasn't easy to take out. So we got our actor to voice the same shots and used the voice over instead of the audio recorded when filming. We also used more voice overs for some other parts of the trailer.

Creation of Production Logo

First, in order to create the production logo, I created a .png file of the basic logo by using a silhouette of a wolf and adding the production name 'WolfPack Productions' and adding a blue glow to the picture. And so the basic Logo was finished.

After adding the original photo into Adobe After Effects, to use the effects I wanted to use, i needed to remove the text and then use the text tool in Adobe After Effects

 Next I imported the .png file into Adobe After Effects and added a Production Name.

 After making 3 other compositions I added some moving strobe lights to make the logo animated and more realistic

 The Logo with the strobe lights, i made it so there is a clear blue colour scheme of the logo.

After carefully analysing what i had so far I decided I was happy with what the final outcome was of the Production Logo so here is a screenshot of me rendering the final product, however I may cut down the time of the Logo to appear in the clip, when importing the clip into the Trailer.

Music

After many hours of searching for royalty free music, our group came to the decision of using these two soundtracks. We choose these two soundtracks as from our research into other real media trailers, we found that a gradual strong beat built tension and enticed the audience. We also choose a much faster, intense Dubstep beat which was extremely necessary for the montage shots. Below is the music that will be used in the trailer.

Used at the beginning of our trailer

Used For the Montage in Our Trailer (Starts At 2:50)

Updated Dialogue (Voice Over)

After nearing completion of our film trailer we are just trying to improve bits a pieces that we think make our trailer feel/look unprofessional and week, therefore we have made a brand new voice over with new dialogue, we may use this as a voice over or even as additional footage of conversation between characters.

Detailed Shot List

This is an updated, detailed version of our shot list. It shows how the trailer will be structured, and the different shots stated with each scene. We have also highlighted where we would put the voiceovers so we can relate it to the scenes.  

Tyrell walking in countryside. 

Dialogue - “I was born and raised on the streets, Life in east London aint easy, These days are behind me” (gap) “But once you’re in the hood (pause) there aint no going back” 

Shots - Establishing shot, long shots in different angles (high/low).

Tyrell talking to Kofi:

Dialogue - “Bro, Ive gotta get out of this life, you’re my brother, I’ve always got your back”

Shots - close up of Kofi looking down. High & Low mid shot of both of them. Over should shot possibly.

Montage shots involving the landscape and urban streets. 

Conversation scene, Tyrell and Aaron:

Dialogue - Dillon: “Yoo, What you saying bruh” (gap) Tyrell: “I aint about this life no more, time to make a fresh start bro” (gap) Dillon: “You think you can run from the hood bruv?” “Naa it don’t work like that” “Your pissed like your brother” (gap) Tyrell: “That’s my brother man, are you mad?!”

Shots - phone on the table over-the-shoulder shot, Ose talking on the phone close up.

Montage shots of urban streets.

Shot to start - Slow zoom in shot of Tyrell to an extreme shot of just his eyes.

Running scene of Tyrell:

Voiceover - “Things change, People change, Friends become enemies & When bloods thicker than water... Everything changes”

Shots - multiple shots like point of view shot, low angled shot, hand-held shots.  

Kofi getting set up by set up chick.

Voiceover – just normal talk

Shots – large shot of everyone, handheld shot, the aftermath running of everyone.

Large montage of everything.

Tyrell in the corner of a building.

Sound - gunshots

Shots – two shot, high angle shot to a close up.

Sharing Footage

Here are two ways our group have managed to show and share filmed clips. We have used GoogleDrive and Dropbox to upload our filmed clips so that everyone in our group has access to them. Therefore, after a day of filming, we can quickly and easily share our content with each other. It is also useful as it allows us to have the clips with us everywhere we go (e.g: in school & at home) which helps with editing, we originally used dropbox at the beginning of our filming process, however we found that after a while Google Drive was a lot more useful to us as the upload time and download speed of clips was much faster than that of Dropbox.

Below are examples of our uploaded footage to GoogleDrive and Dropbox:

Dropbox:

Google Drive:

Location of Filming

Scene 1: Capturing main actor in a rural environment for the start of the trailer. Unique selling point.

Scene 2: Urban subway for the violent, 'rushing scene'.

Scene 3: Running scenes (for montage shots).

Scene 4: Conversation scene.

Shot List

This is the initial shot list for the trailer storyline, which we constructed at the start of the production. We have managed to capture most of these various shots but there are many additions to add to the list as more ideas are formed. 

1.Establishing shot of countryside, with various shots of Ose walking in the countryside.

2.Ose talking to Kofi on urban streets, in various mid shots – “Gotta get out of this life, you’re my brother, I’ve always got your back” – close up of Kofi looking down.

3.Montage shots involving the landscape and urban streets.

4.Running scene of Ose, jumping – voiceover “I was raised on the street, life on the road ain’t easy. This ain’t how I wanna live no more”.

5.Montage shots of urban streets.

6.Scene of Kofi meeting the set up chick then getting beaten up. Shot on the phone of him being recorded.

7.Shot of phone on the table, then of Ose answering the phone - “heard you moved outta ends, you can’t move outta this life you know” “I hear you”

8.Large montage of everything.

Ose in the corner of a building, Then a black scene with gunshots.Shot 

Initial Storyboard

Voice Over Dialogue Draft Script

Urban Drama - Questionnaire